Space: Above and Beyond
Last Modified: February 01, 2001
and Misc. Scenes
When I write a story, I can start and re-start it a
good half-dozen times before stumbling on a beginning that works. Here, for your
amusement, I am posting a few of false beginnings. None are beta-read.
Heart And Soul
Before I nailed this story down, it had
a number of widely varying beginnings. When I first started it, I originally had Gary and
Alvin (from THE WILD HUNT) in it. The story got a little too crowded so I wrote them out
(and into their own series) but here, for your enjoyment, are some of those beginnings.
One: is an alternate beginning of HEART, originally called KOMEESEE
Scene One: is a continuation
of Beginning One.
Scene Two: is another
continuation of Beginning One, this one with the Wild Cards.
Scene Three: yet another
continuation of Beginning One, again with the Wild Cards.
Scene Four: Yes, another
version, one of the first, I think. In this one, Gary had a different
Two: an entirely different version.
Below are two different beginnings to the original
version of THE WILD HUNT.
Here are some miscellaneous beginnings
that don't really go with either of my current series, though they do have elements of
HEART AND SOUL.
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